Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Storytime

once there was a girl
she was beautiful
wait scratch that
too stereotypical
she was ugly
she had coarse brown hair
dark brown dog-crap eyes
and pale skin that burned
but didn't tan
she had freckles
too many of them to count
she had glasses
they were purple and orange
she had braces
that were coming off in a few months
and she was short
very short
and her shortness ended up being her downfall
because one day she was out walking
and she tripped and fell
into fairyworld
there were many different types of fairies there
water fairies
wind fairies
fire fairies
and garden fairies
the girl fell and fell and fell
for a very long time
and then she landed with a big splash in a lake
a water fairy lived in this lake
and heard her cries for help
and her desperate splashing
so the fairy went to go drown the girl
because this fairy was a mean fairy
not a nice friendly helpful one
so the girl saw the fairy coming toward her with evil
in its eyes
and she doggy-paddled frantically toward a tree
that had branches hanging over the lake
one of those branches was long and dangled directly beneath the girls path
so she reached for it
but it eluded her grasp
because it was magical
and also vicious
and it wanted her to drown
so she reached and reached for it
but she couldn't grab it
so she sank slowly beneath the surface of the lake
bubbles rising from her open mouth
her eyes also open
but unseeing
and her hair floating all around her
her glasses fell off and sank to the bottom of the lake faster than she was sinking
but she was beyond noticing
and the fairy and the tree rejoiced
and celebrated her death
if only she had been a bit taller
then she might have grabbed the branch
and this tale wouldn't end
but keep on going right along
with her life
but it doesn't
the end

7 comments:

FatThing said...

wow,
your a really strong writer!
i wish i was....
IT STARRTS WITHA "T"
DOESN'T IT?
TALIA??
COME ON...
PLEASE!

OLIVIA-ROSE. said...

no you're not.
i like this story.

haha and btw,
YOU HAVE THE SICKEST MUSIC TASTE!
i like a ton of the same bands as you =] =]

FatThing said...

OMG OLIVIA SAME HERE!!
WHICH ONES DO YOU KNOW?
I LIKE ALL BUT THE ONES I DON'T KNOW AND THAT'S ONLY LIKE 5 OF THEM!!

I FIGURED IT OUT!!!!
IT'S:
Meital

right???

Anonymous said...

Hello?
Is it still you?
Is it still you underneath all the pain and sadness and wants and hopes and fears and needs and everthing that's happening?
Is it still you under all the truth and lies and thoughts and feelings?
Yes.
Yes, it is still you.
Underneath the pain and suffering, underneath what people need to know but can never know.
Underneath it all.
Underneath it all, when you scrape off all the crusty dried tears of joy and shame, when you scrape off that false skin, the heart that beats is you.
It's you.
It's you, and we love you for you.
Don't you EVER forget that.
Don't you EVER forget that in the end, we're on your side, and nobody else's.
Don't you EVER forget.

rebeldewdrop said...

who is i'll never say? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!! what you said was beautiful, did you write it yourself, or take it from somewhere?

ruffleruffle95 said...

lets specualte about who i'll never say was... maybe it was gunner!!!! but he'd never want us to know who it was!!!! yeah, let's go with gunner

ruffleruffle95 said...

although the writing style is more gravey. btw, gravey, i had a bit of gravy for thanksgiving on my mashed potatoes!